[Thank goodness this is written. Crystal'd feel bad for laughing if the poor anonymous writer could hear her... She just keeps a totally-not-giggling smile on as she tries her best to help. She's no writer either after all!]

That wasn't a bad start though. What about...

Your hair makes me think of the sky at night
Because it's dark and your eyes are bright?

[...oh geez that sounds really stupid. Crystal tapes her pen on the page too, matching his spots.] Or something like that.